Video #1 - Pacing seems very two-tiered - 5 and 6 are at one level, then you jump up to 7-8-9-10 at a much faster pace. We need to blend that together so it builds more naturally from start to finish. Step 7 is still on the same straight line as 1-6, then 8-9-10 are on a pretty straight line toward the bar, making an angular approach and not a circular turn. Still you manage to somehow lean nicely? I think you wait WAY too long to look at the bar - it looks like you don't look at the bar until step 9 on this one! Very nice vertical release and Arch, but the jump breaks real early...

Video #2 - OK you look at the bar earlier here, but step 6 is a slow-down step as you refocus on the bar. Better, more circular turn on this one, and pretty good Lean again. Go frame-by-frame (using the right/left cursor arrow keys) and find the frame right between steps 9 and 10. Look whare your shoulders are pointing - not toward the farther upright! So release is not as vertical and you jump through the bar on the way up.

Video #3 - The slow-down step at 6 is even more prevalent here. Same pre-turn away from the bar - very similar to jump to #2.

Video #4 - Same stuff - we need to get your approach in much better shape to get back to 5'8". At least we know what to work on to make it happen!