Video #1 - Approach shape is good, put pacing is pretty weak (nothing like those GREAT final jumps at CIF). Your release is fairly vertical - so we ARE engraining some good HJ habits in you! This one actually has some pop, but chin on chest ruins it (as usual?). Your WILL and discipline are still on summer vaca on this jump :-) If the chin goes back hard at the top of this jump this is a +4" make... Video #2 - Decent Lean as seen from this angle. A little step-out on 7, but not too bad. Problem here is bar-side arm goes DOWN toward pit instead of releasing upward! Cheater's arch (looking to the side) is just about as bad as chin-on-chest, and weak knee-through has you crossing diagonally on this one. Clip #1 is a better jump even though this one is a make...