Video #1 - Shape of your "J" approach is good on this one - pretty circular in the turn, just a little "flat" at 9-10. Great big HIGH arms at takeoff! Release could be more vertical, andhead never gets back to arch, but lw height so not really needed... Video #2 - Approach is too flat at the end of this one. Steps 9-10 are completely parallel to the bar, so you just fly down the entire length of the bar and never cross OVER it. Need to understand Lean & un-lean at takeoff to get thrown over the bar and into the landing pit. Video #3 - Good approach & paing on this one. Nice POP at the bar and a pretty vertical release which is good. But - look at your head position at the top of this jump. Chin is on chest so no arch! Instead it's the sitting position with your bottom the lowest thing close to the crossbar. Enough pop to make the height here, though... Video #4 - At this higher height the chin forward and sitting position causes a missed attempt. Video #5 - Really good attempt here. Nice pacing on the approach and a good vertical release of the jump. Not sitting as much on this attempt - still not arching but at least "flat" in the air.